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PulseLine, November 20, 2013

IS ANYONE GOING TO DO ANYTHING? I called the state representatives office (617)722-20000. I called the state senators office (617)722-1455. I called the governors office (617)725110. I called the mayors office (413)572-6200. I have a right to produce my own food in The Commonwealth of Massassachussets. I have been fined $650 a day for keeping chickens.

We read with interest and a lot of confusion the Nov. 18 article about the incidents on Fowler Avenue. There were too many pronouns to follow the first two days events without a scorecard. Also each paragraph consisted of one long sentence. It was a convoluted story. That is all the more reason to have fewer pronouns. I am guessing the editor was away that day. Concerned reader.

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